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acperience) wrote2014-04-02 01:08 am
acperience) wrote2014-04-02 01:08 am
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snow white & 7 dwarfs / shirayukihime to 7-nin no shuujin
Vol. 2
Front page: starring Fujimaru.
Additions:
Diverging from Ch. 9, pg. 18
(starting from middle panel)
Fujimaru: ... Are you saying I'm mistaking him for someone else?
Takeru: That's the only explanation! I mean, big bro...
Takeru: Sure, he's hot-blooded and impulsive, but he's a really nice guy who's always looking after others...
Takeru: When it comes to injustice... he hates that more than anyone else—
Fujimaru: This is a recent photo. The old hag's right-hand man...
Fujimaru: The demon Captain Shakudou.
Takeru/narrative: Ah...
Takeru/narrative: ... There's no mistaking it... That's big bro...
Takeru: ... There has to be a reason...
Takeru: There's gotta be a good reason for it...!
(rest follows original)
Diverging from Ch. 13, pg. 13.
Souichi: By the time we woke up, we found ourselves in Tachikawa. What Souji and I have left—
Souichi: is nothing but this rejection that won't stop...!
Takeru: ... Right now, your body's...?
Souichi: Clothing's a hassle, since as our bodies change, our clothes no longer fit. This type of clothing's suited better for that.
Souichi/narrative: There's no choice but to accept it, is there? Accept it...
Souji: (beginning of flashback) ... Big brother... does it hurt? Are you okay?
Souichi/narrative: And then do what we have to...!
Souichi: I'm fine! Don't cry, Souji!
Souji: I'm... I'm not crying! Big brother... here... eat this...
Souichi: You used your power again to go and steal!?
Souichi: If you use your power, your body'll...
Souji: Well... I thought that big brother's body had gotten smaller again...
Souichi/narrative: You... again, you aged...
Souichi: ... Please, Souji...
Souichi: Don't die before me...!
Souji: ... I...
Souji: I'd be satisfied if I could go together with big brother...
(same dialogue as original)
Souichi: We know that I'll eventually revert to being past an infant, while Souji will grow old and die, but... we're not going to roll over and die just yet...!
Souichi: Without fail, we're going to take down the government.
(rest follows original)
Diverging from Ch. 14, pg. 11
(starting from bottom panel)
Souichi: The hunter squad... I've heard of it before. What is it? And why did they call the name "Shakudou"?
Fujimaru: That's the captain who leads the city government's punishment squad...
Fujimaru: And it seems like that that captain is... Shakudou's older brother, Shakudou Izumi...!
Souichi: Ex-Ward Chief... are you sure about that!?
Fujimaru: I can't believe it either! But I've met with Captain Shakudou a million times!
Worker: (beginning of flashback) Chief Fujimaru! A meal has been prepared in the government building, so...
Worker: Please come! After all, it's on Her Excellency's orders...
Fujimaru: Shut up! Go away! I'm not going. Who the hell'd go to the old hag's meal? You can tell her that.
Worker: Ch... Chief Fujimaru!
Other worker: ... sir!
Other worker: R... Really... we intended on returning it immediately...
Fujimaru: What's going on?
Worker: Th... That's...
Other worker: B... By no means would we steal from the city government...
Other worker: Captain Shakudou...
Other worker: P... Please overlook this...
Izumi: Second name of finances. Third name of supplies. For several months, you've been embezzling the government's resources. Receive your punishment now.
Fujimaru/narrative: Though I don't know for sure what suddenly happened... in an instant, all of their heads went flying.
Fujimaru: !
Worker: C... Captain Shakudou! P... Pardon us!
Izumi: You... I've heard a lot about you.
Izumi: The brat who's the Ward Chief of Hachiouji, Akutsu Fujimaru.
Fujimaru: ... Wha...
Fujimaru: What do you mean by that...!?
Izumi: If you want to be defiant, that's your choice, but be prepared for the consequences.
Izumi: A brat's attitude will only be tolerated so much.
Fujimaru: (end flashback) Get it? He's a loyal servant of the city government that took over the wasted Tokyo...
Fujimaru: Of course, it's not just within the government! Even the district civilians don't get it easy...
(rest follows original)
Back page: starring Kuroyuki.
Major redraws: Ch. 14, pg. 8.
Omakes: 1 | 2
Additions:
Diverging from Ch. 9, pg. 18
(starting from middle panel)
Fujimaru: ... Are you saying I'm mistaking him for someone else?
Takeru: That's the only explanation! I mean, big bro...
Takeru: Sure, he's hot-blooded and impulsive, but he's a really nice guy who's always looking after others...
Takeru: When it comes to injustice... he hates that more than anyone else—
Fujimaru: This is a recent photo. The old hag's right-hand man...
Fujimaru: The demon Captain Shakudou.
Takeru/narrative: Ah...
Takeru/narrative: ... There's no mistaking it... That's big bro...
Takeru: ... There has to be a reason...
Takeru: There's gotta be a good reason for it...!
(rest follows original)
Diverging from Ch. 13, pg. 13.
Souichi: By the time we woke up, we found ourselves in Tachikawa. What Souji and I have left—
Souichi: is nothing but this rejection that won't stop...!
Takeru: ... Right now, your body's...?
Souichi: Clothing's a hassle, since as our bodies change, our clothes no longer fit. This type of clothing's suited better for that.
Souichi/narrative: There's no choice but to accept it, is there? Accept it...
Souji: (beginning of flashback) ... Big brother... does it hurt? Are you okay?
Souichi/narrative: And then do what we have to...!
Souichi: I'm fine! Don't cry, Souji!
Souji: I'm... I'm not crying! Big brother... here... eat this...
Souichi: You used your power again to go and steal!?
Souichi: If you use your power, your body'll...
Souji: Well... I thought that big brother's body had gotten smaller again...
Souichi/narrative: You... again, you aged...
Souichi: ... Please, Souji...
Souichi: Don't die before me...!
Souji: ... I...
Souji: I'd be satisfied if I could go together with big brother...
(same dialogue as original)
Souichi: We know that I'll eventually revert to being past an infant, while Souji will grow old and die, but... we're not going to roll over and die just yet...!
Souichi: Without fail, we're going to take down the government.
(rest follows original)
Diverging from Ch. 14, pg. 11
(starting from bottom panel)
Souichi: The hunter squad... I've heard of it before. What is it? And why did they call the name "Shakudou"?
Fujimaru: That's the captain who leads the city government's punishment squad...
Fujimaru: And it seems like that that captain is... Shakudou's older brother, Shakudou Izumi...!
Souichi: Ex-Ward Chief... are you sure about that!?
Fujimaru: I can't believe it either! But I've met with Captain Shakudou a million times!
Worker: (beginning of flashback) Chief Fujimaru! A meal has been prepared in the government building, so...
Worker: Please come! After all, it's on Her Excellency's orders...
Fujimaru: Shut up! Go away! I'm not going. Who the hell'd go to the old hag's meal? You can tell her that.
Worker: Ch... Chief Fujimaru!
Other worker: ... sir!
Other worker: R... Really... we intended on returning it immediately...
Fujimaru: What's going on?
Worker: Th... That's...
Other worker: B... By no means would we steal from the city government...
Other worker: Captain Shakudou...
Other worker: P... Please overlook this...
Izumi: Second name of finances. Third name of supplies. For several months, you've been embezzling the government's resources. Receive your punishment now.
Fujimaru/narrative: Though I don't know for sure what suddenly happened... in an instant, all of their heads went flying.
Fujimaru: !
Worker: C... Captain Shakudou! P... Pardon us!
Izumi: You... I've heard a lot about you.
Izumi: The brat who's the Ward Chief of Hachiouji, Akutsu Fujimaru.
Fujimaru: ... Wha...
Fujimaru: What do you mean by that...!?
Izumi: If you want to be defiant, that's your choice, but be prepared for the consequences.
Izumi: A brat's attitude will only be tolerated so much.
Fujimaru: (end flashback) Get it? He's a loyal servant of the city government that took over the wasted Tokyo...
Fujimaru: Of course, it's not just within the government! Even the district civilians don't get it easy...
(rest follows original)
Back page: starring Kuroyuki.
Major redraws: Ch. 14, pg. 8.
Omakes: 1 | 2
Vol. 3
Front page: starring Ken.
Additions:
Diverging from Ch. 21, pg. 14
(starting from bottom middle panel)
Fujimaru: What should we do...? How do we know that huge guy's telling the truth when he says that he's not with the government?
Fujimaru: As soon as he sees your right arm, he'll know that you're a tekigousha...
Fujimaru: If the guys from the government hunting us down find us, we're done for!
Ken: But it's as Takeru-kun said.
Ken: If the time comes, I'll have to keep on firing.
Fujimaru: Hey.
Fujimaru: Think about what happens after you fire...?
Ken: It's because I've thought about it that I'm saying that.
Ken: ... Sorry. I've become a burden...
Fujimaru: Stop that! That's not—hey!
Fujimaru: Ah, geez! Here, hold onto me!
Souichi: Ken. You should see the doctor. Even if it's not a fundamental solution...
Souichi: Souji. Help him stand.
Souji: Right!
Ken: Thank you, you two...
Ken: But...
Ken: I can walk on my own, so I'd rather not have to be helped.
Souchi: ... I see.
Souichi: Sorry about that, then.
Ken: Hey.
Ken: It's fine too, Fujimaru. Thank you too.
(rest follows original)
Diverging from Ch. 24, pg. 6
Souji: I... broke my promise with big brother...
Souji: ... so are you mad?
Souji: Big brother... Why...
Souji: ... won't you look at me...?
Soldiers: We haven't checked this area yet!
Takeru: Damn it—new troops! They just keep on coming, don't they...!?
Souji: Ta... Takeru-kun, rest a bit! I'll deal with them on my own this time—
Souichi: Souji—!
Souichi: ...!
Takeru: O... Okay! Souichi's also injured, so let's just get outta here!
Takeru: C'mon, Souji! Run!
Takeru: Ummm... Oh—they're not chasing after us!
Takeru: They fell right into Souichi's trap! Haha!
Souichi: Souji. It's not that I don't want to see your face.
Souichi: ... It's that... I don't want to show you mine...!
Souichi: I knew how powerless I was and yet still thought I could protect you...!
Souichi: That overconfidence drove you into a corner...
Souichi: ... and what we've lost that we can never get back...!
Takeru: Isn’t it about time that you started listening to some of Souji’s intentions?
Souichi: The one I'm angry at...
Takeru: If my big brother was suffering on my behalf—
Takeru: I'd never forgive myself.
Souichi: ... is the conceited, selfish, idiotic me...!
Souji: Wha—
Souichi: Souji, I'm sorry.
Souichi: Thank you for saving me.
Souichi: Next time, it'll be your big brother's turn to protect you.
Souichi: Souji, when your power is needed again, will you fight together with your big brother...?
Souji: ... On big brother's level...
Souji: Y-Yes.
Souichi: Then promise me that you won't talk about doing everything on your own like you were before.
Souji: R-Right.
Souji: Right! I promise that I'll always listen to big brother from now on...!
Souichi: Yeah, I'll be counting on you.
(rest follows original after top panels)
Back page: starring Shirayuki and Tama.
Omakes: 1 | 2
Additions:
Diverging from Ch. 21, pg. 14
(starting from bottom middle panel)
Fujimaru: What should we do...? How do we know that huge guy's telling the truth when he says that he's not with the government?
Fujimaru: As soon as he sees your right arm, he'll know that you're a tekigousha...
Fujimaru: If the guys from the government hunting us down find us, we're done for!
Ken: But it's as Takeru-kun said.
Ken: If the time comes, I'll have to keep on firing.
Fujimaru: Hey.
Fujimaru: Think about what happens after you fire...?
Ken: It's because I've thought about it that I'm saying that.
Ken: ... Sorry. I've become a burden...
Fujimaru: Stop that! That's not—hey!
Fujimaru: Ah, geez! Here, hold onto me!
Souichi: Ken. You should see the doctor. Even if it's not a fundamental solution...
Souichi: Souji. Help him stand.
Souji: Right!
Ken: Thank you, you two...
Ken: But...
Ken: I can walk on my own, so I'd rather not have to be helped.
Souchi: ... I see.
Souichi: Sorry about that, then.
Ken: Hey.
Ken: It's fine too, Fujimaru. Thank you too.
(rest follows original)
Diverging from Ch. 24, pg. 6
Souji: I... broke my promise with big brother...
Souji: ... so are you mad?
Souji: Big brother... Why...
Souji: ... won't you look at me...?
Soldiers: We haven't checked this area yet!
Takeru: Damn it—new troops! They just keep on coming, don't they...!?
Souji: Ta... Takeru-kun, rest a bit! I'll deal with them on my own this time—
Souichi: Souji—!
Souichi: ...!
Takeru: O... Okay! Souichi's also injured, so let's just get outta here!
Takeru: C'mon, Souji! Run!
Takeru: Ummm... Oh—they're not chasing after us!
Takeru: They fell right into Souichi's trap! Haha!
Souichi: Souji. It's not that I don't want to see your face.
Souichi: ... It's that... I don't want to show you mine...!
Souichi: I knew how powerless I was and yet still thought I could protect you...!
Souichi: That overconfidence drove you into a corner...
Souichi: ... and what we've lost that we can never get back...!
Takeru: Isn’t it about time that you started listening to some of Souji’s intentions?
Souichi: The one I'm angry at...
Takeru: If my big brother was suffering on my behalf—
Takeru: I'd never forgive myself.
Souichi: ... is the conceited, selfish, idiotic me...!
Souji: Wha—
Souichi: Souji, I'm sorry.
Souichi: Thank you for saving me.
Souichi: Next time, it'll be your big brother's turn to protect you.
Souichi: Souji, when your power is needed again, will you fight together with your big brother...?
Souji: ... On big brother's level...
Souji: Y-Yes.
Souichi: Then promise me that you won't talk about doing everything on your own like you were before.
Souji: R-Right.
Souji: Right! I promise that I'll always listen to big brother from now on...!
Souichi: Yeah, I'll be counting on you.
(rest follows original after top panels)
Back page: starring Shirayuki and Tama.
Omakes: 1 | 2
Vol. 4
Front page: starring Souichi and Souji.
Additions:
Diverging from Ch. 41, pg. 5
Akane: Mom, are you okay? Your face is really pale.
Akane's mother: I'm fine, just a little dizzy... Akane, you cut your hand on the broken dish, didn't you? We have to hurry up and bandage...
Akane: Mom, you're bleeding too... Give me your hand, 'kay?
Akane: Ah... Mom's blood... It says something weird is mixed in...
Akane: It's why you're always dizzy... Umm... Eh? Toxin? What's toxin?
Akane: I don't understand a lot of it... Right.
Akane: B... Blood cell? That's what's being destroyed?
Akane's mother: Akane... you...! That power... You must never let anyone else know about it...!
Akane: (holding a dead fish)... Dead. The blood... isn't saying anything, huh...?
Akane: Ah—you skinned your knee? Can I see? ... Ehh...
Akane: Ehh~~!
Akane: You're catching a cold? And without being picky, drink milk?
Narration/other people: Akane-kun's creepy, isn't he...? Whenever he sees blood, he always keeps trying to touch it, right?
Narration/other people: Somehow, he figured out that we'd wrecked our stomachs...
Narration: "Due to the strength of this germ, it causes deterioration when released," etc. is what has been said, and if left ignored, it becomes very serious.
Akane: Hmm~ This medical text doesn't seem to have the answer.
Akane: As I thought... I'll have to become a doctor myself...
Someone: Hey! Akane!
Someone: Your mother apparently collapsed! Hurry and go to the hospital!
(The image is the same as the original, but the text has been altered.)
Akane: I'm sorry, Mom. I still can't find a cure...
Akane: If I hurry and tell the doctors what's going on with your blood already...
Akane's mother: ... You can't... You can't do that...
Akane's mother: ... Who knows what will happen to you...
Akane's mother: ... I'm sorry... Akane... that you... have that strange power...
(rest of text follows original)
Back page: starring the group.
Omakes: 1 | 2
Additions:
Diverging from Ch. 41, pg. 5
Akane: Mom, are you okay? Your face is really pale.
Akane's mother: I'm fine, just a little dizzy... Akane, you cut your hand on the broken dish, didn't you? We have to hurry up and bandage...
Akane: Mom, you're bleeding too... Give me your hand, 'kay?
Akane: Ah... Mom's blood... It says something weird is mixed in...
Akane: It's why you're always dizzy... Umm... Eh? Toxin? What's toxin?
Akane: I don't understand a lot of it... Right.
Akane: B... Blood cell? That's what's being destroyed?
Akane's mother: Akane... you...! That power... You must never let anyone else know about it...!
Akane: (holding a dead fish)... Dead. The blood... isn't saying anything, huh...?
Akane: Ah—you skinned your knee? Can I see? ... Ehh...
Akane: Ehh~~!
Akane: You're catching a cold? And without being picky, drink milk?
Narration/other people: Akane-kun's creepy, isn't he...? Whenever he sees blood, he always keeps trying to touch it, right?
Narration/other people: Somehow, he figured out that we'd wrecked our stomachs...
Narration: "Due to the strength of this germ, it causes deterioration when released," etc. is what has been said, and if left ignored, it becomes very serious.
Akane: Hmm~ This medical text doesn't seem to have the answer.
Akane: As I thought... I'll have to become a doctor myself...
Someone: Hey! Akane!
Someone: Your mother apparently collapsed! Hurry and go to the hospital!
(The image is the same as the original, but the text has been altered.)
Akane: I'm sorry, Mom. I still can't find a cure...
Akane: If I hurry and tell the doctors what's going on with your blood already...
Akane's mother: ... You can't... You can't do that...
Akane's mother: ... Who knows what will happen to you...
Akane's mother: ... I'm sorry... Akane... that you... have that strange power...
(rest of text follows original)
Back page: starring the group.
Omakes: 1 | 2
Vol. 5
Front page: starring Izumi.
Additions:
Diverging from Ch. 45, pg. 7
Amagiya: If it weren't for Shirayuki-sama, then this Amagiya, as an imperfect tekigousha who would've been a failure...
Amagiya: Even though I was merely someone who was uncouth, mumbling nothing, unable to lift a finger, and so set to be discarded and left to die...
Amagiya: ... Shirayuki-sama...
Amagiya: Back then... I certainly heard it...
Amagiya/narration: Immediately after Tokyo was destroyed, all those involved in politics were gathered in the parliament secretarial building, where I also was...
Amagiya: ... Human experimentation...? (cough) To the politicians, there are superior garbage, hmm...?
Amagiya/narration: After several hours, I had given up hope.
Amagiya: ... Then... to the garbage and the superior garbage... this Amagiya Takurou is to be treated below them... I can't do anything but smile about that, hmm...?
Amagiya/narration: At that time, you appeared.
Amagiya: ... A child...?
Amagiya/narration: Enveloped in the smell of corpses, you went from body to body, lowering your head by each of their hands. You—
Amagiya/narration: Upon noticing me, you looked fearful for an instant as your face became surprised, and—
Amagiya: Wait... what are you...
Amagiya: Miss... let go, please... This doesn't...
Amagiya/narration: ... This feeling... buried in my right hand is the same rock...?
Amagiya/narration: ...! The rock is... attaching itself to...
Amagiya: Who are you...!? Do you still intend to use me in this experime...
Shirayuki: I won't let you die...!
Amagiya/narration: Without a doubt, I heard it.
Amagiya: U... Understood...
Amagiya/narration: Your warm voice, nothing else of which I knew.
Amagiya: If the (temporary) Dwarf Plan is completed, then you will no longer have to deal with such suffering. Amagiya is happy to be an experimental subject and receive your flesh and blood.
Amagiya: ... Shirayuki-sama...
Amagiya: Er... um...
Amagiya: Thank you.
(rest follows original)
Diverging from Ch. 46, pg. 10
Fujimaru: Take this off. I won't run away.
Doctor #1: Who'd believe that?
Doctor #2: Ah, it's okay for that kid.
Doctor #2: He's always been an obedient one during the experimentation.
Doctor #2: Not surprising, considering he's some kid that came from a big shot playing around with a prostitute. (laughs) His cognitive abilities aren't very high, so that's why he was thrown away and bought by us for a meagre sum.
Ken: Fujimaru! Are you all right? If you've reached the point where you can stand, then shouldn't you ask to take a break from the experimentation for the time being?
Fujimaru: Shut up... Leave me alone...
Ken: If you keep going through experiments like this, you'll die!
Fujimaru: ... Yeah... that wouldn't be so bad, huh...?
Ken: This is Tokyo...? Why is it like this...? What happened to the people...?
Ken: Fujimaru... if you're also going to go and look for your old friends and family, then I'll help as well.
Fujimaru: I don't have anyone like that.
Fujimaru: And from here on out, I don't need them either.
Back page: starring the cast.
Omakes: 1 | 2
Additions:
Diverging from Ch. 45, pg. 7
Amagiya: If it weren't for Shirayuki-sama, then this Amagiya, as an imperfect tekigousha who would've been a failure...
Amagiya: Even though I was merely someone who was uncouth, mumbling nothing, unable to lift a finger, and so set to be discarded and left to die...
Amagiya: ... Shirayuki-sama...
Amagiya: Back then... I certainly heard it...
Amagiya/narration: Immediately after Tokyo was destroyed, all those involved in politics were gathered in the parliament secretarial building, where I also was...
Amagiya: ... Human experimentation...? (cough) To the politicians, there are superior garbage, hmm...?
Amagiya/narration: After several hours, I had given up hope.
Amagiya: ... Then... to the garbage and the superior garbage... this Amagiya Takurou is to be treated below them... I can't do anything but smile about that, hmm...?
Amagiya/narration: At that time, you appeared.
Amagiya: ... A child...?
Amagiya/narration: Enveloped in the smell of corpses, you went from body to body, lowering your head by each of their hands. You—
Amagiya/narration: Upon noticing me, you looked fearful for an instant as your face became surprised, and—
Amagiya: Wait... what are you...
Amagiya: Miss... let go, please... This doesn't...
Amagiya/narration: ... This feeling... buried in my right hand is the same rock...?
Amagiya/narration: ...! The rock is... attaching itself to...
Amagiya: Who are you...!? Do you still intend to use me in this experime...
Shirayuki: I won't let you die...!
Amagiya/narration: Without a doubt, I heard it.
Amagiya: U... Understood...
Amagiya/narration: Your warm voice, nothing else of which I knew.
Amagiya: If the (temporary) Dwarf Plan is completed, then you will no longer have to deal with such suffering. Amagiya is happy to be an experimental subject and receive your flesh and blood.
Amagiya: ... Shirayuki-sama...
Amagiya: Er... um...
Amagiya: Thank you.
(rest follows original)
Diverging from Ch. 46, pg. 10
Fujimaru: Take this off. I won't run away.
Doctor #1: Who'd believe that?
Doctor #2: Ah, it's okay for that kid.
Doctor #2: He's always been an obedient one during the experimentation.
Doctor #2: Not surprising, considering he's some kid that came from a big shot playing around with a prostitute. (laughs) His cognitive abilities aren't very high, so that's why he was thrown away and bought by us for a meagre sum.
Ken: Fujimaru! Are you all right? If you've reached the point where you can stand, then shouldn't you ask to take a break from the experimentation for the time being?
Fujimaru: Shut up... Leave me alone...
Ken: If you keep going through experiments like this, you'll die!
Fujimaru: ... Yeah... that wouldn't be so bad, huh...?
Ken: This is Tokyo...? Why is it like this...? What happened to the people...?
Ken: Fujimaru... if you're also going to go and look for your old friends and family, then I'll help as well.
Fujimaru: I don't have anyone like that.
Fujimaru: And from here on out, I don't need them either.
Back page: starring the cast.
Omakes: 1 | 2
